ChatGPT’s answer to the question: Could I have your opinion about this flash fiction piece?- Respuesta de ChatGPT a la pregunta: ¿Podría darme su opinión sobre el siguiente relato corto?

Francisco Martínez
5 min readAug 16

ChatGPT’s answer to the question: Could I have your opinion about this flash fiction piece?

Title: Shadow (from my blog: https://minutorelatos.blogspot.com/2023/08/chatgpts-answer-to-question-could-i.html

During the night, I went to the cemetery to accompany the spirit of my recently deceased wife. Sitting at the edge of the grave, I talked to her and remembered the last moments we lived together. At first, I thought I saw something moving in the distance. Intrigued, I tried to identify it. A few moments passed and that began to take shape. It was a shadow. It was a shadow cast by the moonlight. Suspicious and maintaining distance, that black shape greeted me timidly with a wave of its hand. For an instant, terror seized me. Slowly, I tried to walk away toward the exit but to increase my despair, two other shadows blocked my way a few meters away. I plucked up my courage and ran to the massive iron gate that I had left ajar. When I reached the height of the shadows, I looked at the ground and I could see my shadow going through them without any impediment. When I left the cemetery, under the moonlight, I ran a long way and then tried to sit down to recover my strength. It was then that I noticed that my hands were not finding my body, because I was just another shadow.

Sure, I’d be happy to provide feedback on your flash fiction piece! Your story “Shadow. Shadow” is intriguing and carries a…

Francisco Martínez

Telecom engineer. International Relations, Translations.